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Studying alone allows people to concentrate more. Group studying is also becoming popular because th

김승민/2025-03-03

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Students can learn endurance during study alone and manage their time by themselves. On the other hand, For group study, Students can study by force. Group intelligence can be happened. They can give feedbacks each other.

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Hi Seung Min!

I'm glad you were able to get this done.

Thank you for your effort.

I hope you're enjoying your holiday.

See you later.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Students can learn endurance during study alone and manage their time by themselves.

>> Students can learn patience while studying alone and they can also learn how to manage their time by themselves.

On the other hand, For group study, Students can study by force.

>> On the other hand, some students may be forced to study in a group setting.
Group intelligence can be happened.

>> They can depend on the collective knowledge of the group.
They can give feedbacks each other.

>> They can give feedback to each other.