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Describe your ideal supermarket.

차진혁/2025-02-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think describ my ideal supermarket is very clean and fresh supermarket because it is very good. So clean is very most important for supermarket.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good goodnight! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                      

                    

                                     

                                    Describe your ideal supermarket.


I think describ my ideal supermarket is very clean and fresh supermarket because it is very good.
>> I think my ideal supermarket is super clean and fresh because it is very good that way.

So clean is very most important for supermarket.
>> Cleanliness is the most important for a supermarket. 
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