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Wolf has gray fur. And it also has bitter eyes. It eats animals like deer, sheep, and it lives in forest.

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Hi Kara!

Your answer is actually quite surprising.

You literally described the wolf's appearance.

There was nothing wrong with that, but I would like you to think outside the box too. :)

Always remember that you can also describe something figuratively.

Andrea

Wolf has gray fur. And it also has bitter eyes.

>> Wolf has a gray fur and bitter eyes.

It eats animals like deer, sheep, and it lives in forest.

>> It is a carnivore, so it eats other kinds of animals.

>> It also leaves in a forest.