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김나은/2025-02-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When itis rain, I lesten to the happy song. I look at the sky of scenery. And I like to go for a walk when it is shower.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, Na Eun. I enjoy learning about your experiences and thoughts on certain subjects. I'm sure the next rainy day isn't going to be boring and sad. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Have a good night! ~Teacher Jane 


When itis rain, I lesten to the happy song. 
>> When it rains I listen to a happy song. 

I look at the sky of scenery. 
>>  I look at the sky for scenery. 

And I like to go for a walk when it is shower.
>> And I like to go for a walk when it showers. 

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