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What would you do if you craved chicken in the middle of the night? Would you order it, or would you

이승훈/2025-02-27

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if i crave chicken in the middle of the night, i watching eat youtuber. when i saw eat youtuber eating, i vicarious satisfaction. or while i saw eat youtuber eating, i eating some eggs or eating nuts. if i eat chicken in the middle of the night,i will fatter. and if i eat heavy food in the middle of the night, i I can't digest. so i will late sleep. so i don't prfer eat in the middle of the night.
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Hello, Hun!
It's very interesting that watching YouTubers eat helps you satisfy your food cravings. It's the complete opposite for me! When I watch YouTubers eat, especially food vloggers, it makes me crave the food they are eating, which is why I end up eating late at night!
- T. Caitlyn 
if i crave chicken in the middle of the night, i watching eat youtuber.
>> If I crave chicken in the middle of the night, I watch YouTubers eating.
when i saw eat youtuber eating, i vicarious satisfaction.
>> When I watch YouTubers eating, I feel vicarious satisfaction.
or while i saw eat youtuber eating, i eating some eggs or eating nuts.
>> Or while I watch a YouTuber eat, I eat some eggs or nuts.
if i eat chicken in the middle of the night,i will fatter.
>> If I eat chicken in the middle of the night, I will get fatter.
and if i eat heavy food in the middle of the night, i I can't digest. 
>> And if I eat heavy food in the middle of the night, I can't digest it.
so i will late sleep.
>> So I will sleep late.
so i don't prfer eat in the middle of the night.
>> So I don't prefer eating in the middle of the night.
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