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김나은/2025-02-26

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If I think of a new idea, I think mini heater. during winter, I thought winter weakness. It's so cold that it is winter weakness.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, Na Eun. I'm happy to read your thoughts on the homework topic. I think it's a great idea especially if it would help get over winter weaknesses :) Maybe someday someone would come up with something similar. Once again, I appreciate you looking into the homework and expressing your thoughts about it. Have a good night! ~Teacher Jane c",) 


If I think of a new idea, I think mini heater. 
>> If I think of a new idea for an invention it would be a mini heater. 

during winter, I thought winter weakness. 
>> During winter I think of winter weakness. 

It's so cold that it is winter weakness. 
>> OR: It's so cold and we call it winter weakness. 
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