The reason why people work a lot is that their economic power is weakened that much. Economic power here does not enrich our lives, but it refers to the money we spend and the economic ability we earn to enjoy life. We have made economic progress, but we don't make much money to enrich our lives, which is why we take a lot of working hours. To do this, bosses need to comply with the law and collaborate with workers.

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