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Express my appreciation

양기연/2025-02-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think expressing appreciation after some events is a good culture. And it is a good way to maintain a good relationship. Sending a thank card or texting message is a simple and good way for busy people nowadays. But I prefer to call or meet and express my gratitude by giving some gifts or treating meals. Through the gathering, I find the relationship stronger.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Gi Yean!

I totally agree with you! Meeting them in person and treating them to meals can show that you are really sincere and that you truly appreciate what they've done. It's also a nice way to strengthen relationships because you get to spend time with the people you value and who value you!

- T. Caitlyn

I think expressing appreciation after some events is a good culture.

>> I think expressing appreciation after events is a good practice.

And it is a good way to maintain a good relationship.

>> CORRECT

Sending a thank card or texting message is a simple and good way for busy people nowadays.

>> Sending a thank-you card or a text message is a simple and good way for busy people nowadays.

But I prefer to call or meet and express my gratitude by giving some gifts or treating meals.

>> But I prefer to call or meet in person and express my gratitude by giving gifts or treating them to a meal.

Through the gathering, I find the relationship stronger.

>> Through gatherings, I find that relationships become stronger.