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권경희/2025-02-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If the NK soldiers will be transfer to third country, North Korea will revenge against them and the country. It is very worrisome situation that dictators similar to Hitler are increasing in the world. They are becoming core power of international order.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Lily!
I think you are right, and North Korea will not hesitate to do that because they know that most third-world countries are relying on America. It will cause fear among citizens if these soldiers are brought to their country.
Have a ice day!
Aki~


If the NK soldiers will be transfer to third country, North Korea will revenge against them and the country.
>>> If the NK soldiers are transferred to a third-world country, North Korea will revenge against them and the country.

It is very worrisome situation that dictators similar to Hitler are increasing in the world.
>>> It is a very worrisome situation that dictators similar to Hitler are increasing in the world.

They are becoming core power of international order.
>>> They are becoming the core power of international order.
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