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‘If the mirror is broken today, it is unlucky day.’

유수빈/2025-02-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

The most common superstitions in Korea is ‘If the mirror is broken today, it is unlucky day.’ Actually, I have a story this superstiton. One day, I had a english listening test in my middle school. I was preparing to go to school in the morning, but my mirror was broken because of my mistake. So, I was very anxious, because I’ll got a bad score on the test. But, I got a 100 score in the test! I think that a superstition is just a superstition. ^_^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Su Bin!

Thank you for sharing about this superstition you have in your country. Good job on your homework!
~Teacher Jess

The most common superstitions in Korea is ‘If the mirror is broken today, it is unlucky day.’

>> The most common superstition in Korea is, ‘If a mirror breaks today, it will be an unlucky day.’

Actually, I have a story this superstiton.

>> Actually, I have a story about this superstition.

One day, I had a english listening test in my middle school.

>> One day, I had an English listening test in middle school.

I was preparing to go to school in the morning, but my mirror was broken because of my mistake.

>> I was preparing to go to school in the morning, but I accidentally broke my mirror.

So, I was very anxious, because I’ll got a bad score on the test.

>> So, I was very anxious because I thought I would get a bad score on the test.

But, I got a 100 score in the test! I think that a superstition is just a superstition.

>> But, I got a 100 on the test! I think that a superstition is just a superstition.