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What activities with animals do you enjoy most? (walking, feeding, bathing)

임솔비/2025-02-23

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first, I like to lie next the my dog and I touch her stomach. second, I like to go for a walk around my house with my dog. finally, I like to smell the dog's feet

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Hi, Julia^^
Thank you for sharing.
I hope you enjoyed your time with the dogs last weekend.
_T. SHAY^^
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first, I like to lie next the my dog and I touch her stomach.
>>First, I like to lie next to the dog and touch her belly.

OR: First, I like to lie next to the dog and scratch her belly.
second, I like to go for a walk around my house with my dog.

>>Second, I like to go for a walk around my house with dog.

finally, I like to smell the dog's feet
>>Third, I like to smell the dog's feet.