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When i hear the word 'solos'..

김민지/2025-02-23

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Q. What comes to mind when you hear the word 'solo'? A. When i hear the word 'solo' firstly, i feel the loneliness. Surely, good thing that 'solo' word can express is..!! I seek 'together'. Because when i get together more happier than alone. Very simple example, in a special case, when i come in a restaurant, if i go there alone, i will order one or two menu. but if i go with someone, i will order many menu! ha ha... but, i respect the people that "solo is best" said the people like that i think, someone is alone state more comefortable than together. Maybe they not familiar to the together station, a person himself like alone. so.. of course i want to respect the other people that have my opposite opinion. and i wonder teacher's opinion! and... i'm sorry to my incorrectly sentences.. thank you!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Min Ji!

You can gain a deeper understanding of yourself by spending time alone, which is one of the biggest advantages.

Spending time with people who make you feel good, learning new things that interest you, and doing things you love are all more likely when you know yourself better.

Thank you for finding time to accomplish your homework. I will see you tomorrow in class.

Have a good night!^^

__Teacher Mayleen :)

When i hear the word 'solo' firstly, i feel the loneliness. Surely, good thing that 'solo' word can express is..!!

I seek 'together'. Because when i get together more happier than alone.

>>> The first time I heard the word 'solo', I felt lonely. Surely, one wonderful thing that the word 'solo' might communicate is my desire to be "together" because getting together makes me happier than being alone.

Very simple example, in a special case, when i come in a restaurant,
if i go there alone, i will order one or two menu. but if i go with someone, i will order many menu! ha ha...
but, i respect the people that "solo is best" said the people like that
i think, someone is alone state more comefortable than together. Maybe they not familiar to the together station, a person himself like alone.

>>> A very simple example: in some cases, when I visit a restaurant alone, I will order one or two dishes. If I go with someone, I will order a large amount of food! Ha Ha!

But I respect people who believe that being alone is preferable.

I believe that someone is more comfortable being alone than with others. Maybe they are unfamiliar with togetherness and want to be alone.

so.. of course i want to respect the other people that have my opposite opinion.
and i wonder teacher's opinion! and... i'm sorry to my incorrectly sentences..
thank you!!

>>> So of course I want to respect people who have opposite opinions.

Also, I wonder about the teacher's opinion, and I'm sorry for my incorrect sentences. Thank you!!

>>> OR: So, of course, I want to appreciate those with opposing viewpoints.

Also, I am curious about the teacher's opinion, and I apologize for my incorrect sentences. Thank you!!

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