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김나은/2025-02-21

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When I watch movies, I prefer mixing both comedy and tragedy. since I like that first started tragedy but last is happy and comedy. people may think so common story but I like that story. I think this movie is the best movie.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, Na Eun. Again, you did a great job with this homework. And I enjoyed reading it because I agree with your opinion. I love those kinds of movies as well. I hope the movie industry keep coming up with these kinds of movies. I hope you're having a good Friday. I'll see you in class. ~Teacher Jane c",) 


When I watch movies, I prefer mixing both comedy and tragedy. 
>> CORRECT 
>> OR: I prefer choosing movies with a bit of both comedy and tragedy. 

since I like that first started tragedy but last is happy and comedy. 
>> Even though it starts with a tragedy I want the ending to be happy or comedy. 

people may think so common story but I like that story. 
>> People may think it's a common story but I like it. 

I think this movie is the best movie.
>> I think this kind of movie is the best kind of movie. 
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