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What springs to mind when you hear the term ‘animal rights?

이노준/2025-02-21

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Animal right? I think the Animal rights is that their's receive the love right. Actually I have one dog. He's name is smart. When I feel tired, sad, He is always look at me. This is my pleasure. If somebody suggest that replace my dog with 50000000 dollars. I refuse it. This is animal rights for me.
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Hello Chris,


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T. Jeny


Animal right?
>>What is animal rights?
I think the Animal rights is that their's receive the love right.
>>I think Animal rights is to receive the right to love.
Actually, I have one dog.
>>correct
He's name is Smart.
>>His name is Smart.
When I feel tired, sad, He is always look at me.
>>When I feel tired and sad, he always looks at me.
This is my pleasure.
>>correct
If somebody suggest that replace my dog with 50000000 dollars.
>>If somebody will suggest to replace my dog with $50,000,000.
I refuse it.
>>correct
OR>>I would refuse it.
This is animal rights for me.
>>correct
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