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What do you think is the most important home appliance? Why?

차진혁/2025-02-21

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I think the most home appliances is fridge because fridge is the food those not spoil. So fridge is very most home appliances.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you soon! 


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                   What do you think is the most important home appliance? Why?


I think the most home appliances is fridge because fridge is the food those not spoil.
>> I think the most important home appliance is the fridge because it will save food from spoiling. 

So fridge is very most home appliances.
>> So the fridge is the most important home appliance. 
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