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Why do you think body language is important?

한다연/2025-02-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think body language is important. First of all, it is a way of communication. I can communicate with people more effectively. Like using hands to concentrate or to express an additional explanation. It is more useful for explainer like a teacher. Second, We can communicate people who can't listen. There is a beautiful sign that is called sign language. I want a chance to learn about sign language.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Nicole!
What a nice insight on body language and yes, as a teacher, it is very important for us. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

I think body language is important.
>>CORRECT!
First of all, it is a way of communication.
>>CORRECT!
I can communicate with people more effectively. Like using hands to concentrate or to express an additional explanation.
>>I can communicate with people more effectively, like using hand gestures to emphasize a point or provide additional explanation.
It is more useful for explainer like a teacher.
>>It is especially useful for explainers, such as teachers.
Second, We can communicate people who can't listen.
>>Second, we can communicate with people who can't hear.
There is a beautiful sign that is called sign language.
>>There is a beautiful language called sign language.
I want a chance to learn about sign language.
>>I would love to have a chance to learn it.
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