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권경희/2025-05-02

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I could not understand why many people suffer from spending big money for wedding venue. I think that is relate to value of people's selection. They want to enjoy a great place for only onetime wedding for their life. Korean are seeking pretense for others unnecessary things.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good morning, Ms. Lily,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. If we try to compare the weddings in the past, People focused on the marriage alone, not the whole thing (place and decorations). Nowadays, it gives "pride" to couples if they have chosen a very good and expensive place. 
See you later!
Aki~

I could not understand why many people suffer from spending big money for wedding venue.
>>> I could not understand why many people suffer from spending a lot of money on a wedding venue.

I think that is relate to value of people's selection.
>>>  I think that is related to the value of people's selection.

They want to enjoy a great place for only onetime wedding for their life.
>>>  They want to enjoy a great place because it only happens once in a lifetime.

Korean are seeking pretense for others unnecessary things.
>>> Koreans are seeking excuses for unnecessary things.
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