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If you could compare your self to anyone, who would it be and why?

차진혁/2025-02-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I comare self to anyone my rival because my rival is self first and bad. But I'm not self first and help the friend.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you later! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                      

                      If you could compare yourself to anyone, who would it be and why?


I comare self to anyone my rival because my rival is self first and bad.
>> I don't compare myself to anyone because my main rival is myself and comparing isn't good. 

But I'm not self first and help the friend.
>> I would rather help my friends than compare to or compete with them. 
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