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김나은/2025-02-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
when I see a photogragh, I see a photogragh only look at it. I feel bored when I see a photograph deep. I see a photograph then I don't think anythings because I fall out this scene.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, Na Eun. Thank you for your honest opinion on the topic. :) I guess there are only a few people who are interested in looking deeply and meticulously at photographs. Maybe we'll get a chance to talk about photographs in our class. I hope you're having a good day. I'll see you in class later. ~Teacher Jane c",) 


when I see a photogragh, I see a photogragh only look at it. 
>> Whenever I see a photograph I only look at it. 

I feel bored when I see a photograph deep. 
>> I feel bored when I look at it deeply. 

I see a photograph then I don't think anythings because I fall out this scene.
>> When I see a photograph I don't think anything different about it and I forget about it. 

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