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김지숙/2025-02-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I will ride a bike during cloudy weather.because cloudy weather is not hot. I will stay at home during snowy weather. because snowy weather is cold and the road is slippery

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Eric,

Thanks for your homework.

-Teacher Ash

I will ride a bike during cloudy weather.because cloudy weather is not hot.

>> I will ride a bike during cloudy days because it is not that hot.

I will stay at home during snowy weather. because snowy weather is cold and the road is slippery

>> I will stay at home during snowy days because it is cold, and the road is slippery.