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The safest body of water is not because every sea is very dangerous and cold. And sea is very deep and cold.

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Here's your second corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. See you next week! Have a good night's sleep!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What's the safest body of water? Why?

The safest body of water is not because every sea is very dangerous and cold.

And sea is very deep and cold.

>> There's no such thing as the safest body of water because every sea is very dangerous, deep, and cold.