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How can you convince someone to stop making a bad habit?

이진태/2025-02-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If I want to change someone's bad habit, I would tell to them about baddest situations caused by bad habit. For example, If someone have a late habit, I will tell him or her. "If you don't change your habit, you could be fired in a bad situation.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

If I want to change someone's bad habit, I would tell to them about baddest situations caused by bad habit.
>> If I want to change someone's bad habit, I would tell them about the worst situations caused by that habit.

For example, If someone have a late habit, I will tell him or her.
>> For example, if someone has a habit of being late, I would say to them,

"If you don't change your habit, you could be fired in a bad situation.
>> 'If you don't change your habit, you could be fired because of it.