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이영숙/2025-02-18

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I went to see (lee moon se) he is a(an) old singer’s and sings well. I listened to a lot when I was young. When I listen to his song I remember the my childhood.

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Hello, Michelle!

Thank you for sharing with me the singer you wanted to see in a concert. I agree with you. Hearing songs from our childhood is really nice; it makes us reminisce and gives us a feeling of nostalgia.

- T. Caitlyn

I went to see (lee moon se)

>> I want to see Lee Moon Se.

he is a(an) old singer’s and sings well.

>> He is an old singer and sings well.
I listened to a lot when I was young.

>> I listened to a lot of his songs when I was young.
When I listen to his song I remember the my childhood.

>> When I listen to his songs, I remember my childhood.