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김순님/2025-02-17

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Couples who are living together for a longtime don't have love affection. There is a word "hateful affection" Marriage couples can be patient from their past memory . So it is important that couples need to try having a good behavior. Intimate is a good memory.but it is more important to be together in the same room.
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Ms. Sunny!
This makes me a little sad. hahaha  But I think it's true because a lot of older couples often argue about petty things.I guess, I will try to keep this in mind to avoid such a situation. Thank you for this!
T. Aki~

Couples who are living together for a longtime don't have love affection.
>>>  Couples who are living together for a long time don't have love or affection.

There is a word "hateful affection"
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is called "hateful affection".

Marriage couples can be patient from their past memory .
>>> Marriage couples can be patient from their memory.

So it is important that couples need to try having a good behavior.
>>> So it is important that couples need to try having good behavior.

Intimate is a good memory.but it is more important to be together in the same room.
>>>  Intimate is a good memory but it is more important to be together in the same room.
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