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I’m curious about Philippines’s life.

유수빈/2025-02-07

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I’m curious about Philippines’s life. I know that there’s weather is cool and dry in winter. I’ve just experienced cold in winter, so I want to experience another weather.
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Hi Kara, 

I am so happy that you are curious about our country. 
We have a simple life in the Philippines. 
Foreigners say that Filipinos are very friendly. 
Most people can speak English it is not hard to communicate.

Andrea 

I’m curious about Philippines’s life.
>> I am curious about the life in the Philippines. 

I know that there’s weather is cool and dry in winter.
>> I know the weather there is cool and dry in winter. 

I’ve just experienced cold in winter, so I want to experience another weather.
>> Correct 
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