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Does your country celebrate a special event to commemorate senior citizens?

차유진/2025-02-07

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Yes, but small event it is commemorate senior citizens day it's a day to respect the commemorate senior citizens.
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Here's another corrected composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good evening there! 


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             Does your country celebrate a special event to commemorate senior citizens?


Yes, but small event it is commemorate senior citizens day it's a day to respect the commemorate senior citizens.
>>> Yes, but it's only a small event called Senior Citizens Day, which is a day to respect and commemorate senior citizens.

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