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dairy

김디노/2025-02-07

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I just started learning again. I lived in Australia about 10 years ago for like 5 years and I thought I could use English quite well but after came back to Korea, I had no time to use English and I was getting hard to say something in English. I have been felt little bit sad about that and I determined that studying English again.
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Hello Dino,


We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.

I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.

T. Jeny


I just started learning again.
>>correct
I lived in Australia about 10 years ago for like 5 years and I thought I could use English quite well but after came back to Korea,
>>I lived in Australia for about 10 years ago for like 5 years, and I thought I could use English quite well, but after I came back to Korea.
I had no time to use English and I was getting hard to say something in English.
>>I had no time to use English, and it was getting hard for me to say something in English.
I have been felt little bit sad about that and I determined that studying English again.
>>I have been feeling a little bit sad about that, and I am determined to study English again.
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