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이연숙/2025-02-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Question: Should parents scold their children for bad grades? Answer: No. Scolding student is very bad. Because scolding student, The student will get a stress.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yeonsuk!

I totally agree with you. It's not good to scold students as it will only cause stress to them,

No. Scolding student is very bad.

>> No, scolding student is very bad.

Because scolding student, The student will get a stress.

>> Because if parents scold their children it will only make them stress.