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이영숙/2025-02-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

1.we look at the sky .the moon (so?) is beautiful. 2. They look at the car .It’s going fast. 3. We look at the times.we going to be late. 4.I look at the menu.and choose my food.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Michelle!

Wonderful job! You did great on this homework. Just minor corrections: 'The moon is beautiful,' or if you want to add more emphasis, you can say, 'The moon is so beautiful.' Also, for number 3, we use 'time' instead of 'times' because 'time' is uncountable and it's referring to the general concept of time.

- T. Caitlyn

1.we look at the sky .the moon (so?) is beautiful.

>> We look at the sky. The moon is beautiful.
2. They look at the car .It’s going fast.

>> CORRECT
3. We look at the times.we going to be late.

>> We look at the time. We're going to be late.
4.I look at the menu and choose my food.

>> CORRECT