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김순님/2025-02-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If there hadn\\\'t been the Korean subject in the entrance exam. Students wouldn\\\'t have studied hard the Korean class. Our high school system is separated for exam. Each students only study the class which is included in exam. I think Korean class have to be continued at least untill high-school. Reading skill is the basic in our lives.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
Thank you for sharing this matter. I think every exam, there is a part where we need to focus. Bing prepared in these situations can assure us to have a good result.
T. Aki~


If there hadn\\\'t been the Korean subject in the entrance exam. students wouldn\\\'t have studied hard the Korean class.
>>> If there hadn't been a Korean subject in the entrance exam, students wouldn't have studied hard in the Korean class.

Our high school system is separated for exam.
>>> Our high school system is separated for exams.

Each students only study the class which is included in exam.
>>> Each student only studies the class which is included in the exam.

I think Korean class have to be continued at least untill high-school.
>>> I think Korean classes have to be continued at least until high school.

Reading skill is the basic in our lives.
>>>  Reading skills are the basic in our lives.

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