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김도연/2025-02-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
What were your favorite games when you were younger? Would you still play them now? My favorite game was Minecraft. I still play it from time to time. I played this with my sister.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Jessica!
You did it! Nice work! Your response is clear and easy to understand, but you can make it more detailed and complex by adding explanations or combining sentences. Thank you for your patience. :)
~ Trixia

CONTENT:
My favorite game was Minecraft.
- CORRECT.
I still play it from time to time.
> CORRECT.
I played this with my sister.
> I used to play it with my sister.
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