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What’s the most frustrating thing that happened to you recently?

임주미/2025-02-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It is a hatefulness about my elder sister. After my dad passed away ,we shared my parent's property and I often felt sorry for her along the way. Nawdays I want to keep at a distance frankly. I know It is a politeness but my heart wants that now
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ju Mi! I hope you and your family can talk about the issue. ^^ Since your father has already passed away, it's just you and your siblings now. Thank you for sharing something personal. Have a good day!
~T. Jewel
It is a hatefulness about my elder sister.
>>It is hatred towards my elder sister.
After my dad passed away ,we shared my parent's property and I often felt sorry for her along the way.
>>After my dad passed away, we shared my parents' property, and I often felt sorry for her along the way.
Nawdays I want to keep at a distance frankly.
>>Nowadays, I want to keep my distance, frankly.
I know It is a politeness but my heart wants that now.
>>I know it's a matter of politeness, but my heart wants something else now.
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