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What do you think of "hand-me-down" clothing? Will you wear one if somebody gives you one?

이현준/2025-01-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think hand-me-down clothing is fine. I don't need to buy clothes with money. When i was a young, i wore hand-me-down clothes. But i don't wear hand-me-down clothes now. Because i have a money, so i can buy my favorite clothes.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Jun!
 Did you know that the world has a lot of textile trash? If people will be more caring about the environment, hand-me-down items are not of a big deal as long as it is clean, and wearable. Let's practice saving the environment so it would last longer :)
T. Aki~


I think hand-me-down clothing is fine. 
>>>  CORRECT!

I don't need to buy clothes with money.
>>>  I don’t feel the need to spend money on clothes.

When i was a young, i wore hand-me-down clothes. But i don't wear hand-me-down clothes now.
>>> When I was younger, I wore hand-me-downs, but I don't wear them now.

Because i have a money, so i can buy my favorite clothes.
>>>  Since I have money, I can buy clothes I really like."
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