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What's your thoughts on boys cooking?

차진혁/2025-01-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think the boys cooking true because only have a father kids is the father cooking is very good for kids. And boys are use cooking.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you later! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                       

                                       

                                               What's your thoughts on boys cooking?

I think the boys cooking true because only have a father kids is the father cooking is very good for kids. And boys are use cooking.
>> I think boys don't cook because the father cooks for his kids and the kids can cook together with their dad and this will create a good memory and experience for the family. 
>> [ NOTE: I'M NOT SURE WHETHER I INTERPRETED YOUR SENTENCE CORRECTLY. ]

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