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김나라/2025-01-24

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Writing task: Which is the best way for you to watch a movie? Answer: I think cinema is best above all. There is big screen, a great sound system, and popcorn!! These days cinemas have reclining seat which are really comportable. of course, we can watch a lot of movies at home throught streaming, but I can watch the lateast movies quickly at the cinema that is good!

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Hello, Ms. Nara! I have heard of those cinemas with reclining seats. They even serve you food! But, I think, movie tickets have skyrocketed. It's unbelievable.

-T. Sonny

I think cinema is best above all.

>>I think, the cinema would be the best way to see a movie above all.

There is big screen, a great sound system, and popcorn!!

>>There is a big screen, a great sound system, and most especially, popcorn!

These days cinemas have reclining seat which are really comportable.

>>These days have reclining seats which are totally comfortable.

of course, we can watch a lot of movies at home throught streaming, but I can watch the lateast movies quickly at the cinema that is good!

>>Of course, we can watch tons of movies at home through streaming, but what makes going to the cinema better is that I can watch the latest movies quickly.