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김나라/2025-01-24

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: What are the best ways to make a good first impression? Answer : I learned MOT when I was majoring in business administration, and it determines a person's image in 3 seconds. So to make a good first impression, I think it will be a smile and neat clothes, and if you add it, it will be a confident look.

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Hello, Ms. Nara! That's an interesting concept. But, I agree that dressing up neatly and coming up with a smiling face always work.

-T. Sonny
I learned MOT when I was majoring in business administration, and it determines a person's image in 3 seconds.

>>Correct!

So to make a good first impression, I think it will be a smile and neat clothes, and if you add it, it will be a confident look.

>>So to make a good first impression, I think, a smile and neat clothes are essential and with that combination, you will look confident.