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Trump's policies

양기연/2025-01-24

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I don't know exactly how many new policies he tryst to implement. Among them, I'm worried about some policies which are very America- centered and exclusive. First,I hate his order to eliminate environmental programs of the government. And I am worried about his policy for expansion of America territory. I also have a concern about his recognition that there are just two sexes. In addition, I disagree with his policy on the withdrawal from WHO.

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Hi, Gi Yean!

I agree with you! Since we are not American citizens, I think we are both worried that policies that are America-centered will greatly affect how they treat other countries. America is a very powerful country, and if they want to control other countries, I think they can, which is scary.

- T. Caitlyn

I don't know exactly how many new policies he tryst to implement.

>> I don't know exactly how many new policies he tries to implement.

Among them, I'm worried about some policies which are very America- centered and exclusive.

>> CORRECT

First,I hate his order to eliminate environmental programs of the government.

>> CORRECT

And I am worried about his policy for expansion of America territory.

>> And I am worried about his policy for the expansion of American territory.

I also have a concern about his recognition that there are just two sexes.

>> CORRECT

In addition, I disagree with his policy on the withdrawal from WHO.

>> CORRECT