/2025-01-23
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Dahea!
Your thoughts here are really insightful! Youve done
a great job explaining how people sometimes underestimate the dangers of
certain things because they believe "it won't happen to me." This is
an important point to recognize, and youve shared it in a clear and thoughtful
way.
I also love how you pointed out that taking risks is
okay when it's done within safe and legal boundaries, like starting a business
or taking on new challenges. That's a great perspective! Im so proud of your
progress in expressing complex ideas like this in English. Youre improving so
much, and Im honored to have such a wonderful student like you.
~Teacher Cathy
There is a difference between what
people feel is dangerous.
>>CORRECT
OR>>There is a difference in
what people perceive as dangerous.
There are also people who don't feel
dangerous in the difference.
>>There are also people who don't
perceive the difference as dangerous.
For example, gamblers, thieves,
criminals, drug offenders, etc.
>>CORRECT
OR>>For example, gamblers,
thieves, criminals, drug offenders, and others.
Usually, these people have the silly
idea that "it's possible if it's me," no matter how dangerous it is.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Usually, these people have
the misguided belief that 'it's possible if it's me,' no matter how dangerous
it may be.
Or, there are people who make the
mistake of taking care of their lives with the luck of "It was okay last
time, so it's okay this time."
>>CORRECT
OR>>Or, there are people who
make the mistake of taking their lives for granted, thinking, 'It was okay last
time, so it will be okay this time.
In any case, taking risks in your
life should be avoided as much as possible, and even if you do something
dangerous, you should do it within the scope of your own solution.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In any case, taking risks
in life should be avoided as much as possible, and even when doing something
dangerous, it should be done within the limits of your own control.
For example, I think it's brave to
take risks within the legal categories of starting a business or challenging a
new test.
>>CORRECT
OR>>For example, I believe it's
brave to take risks within the legal boundaries of starting a business or
taking on a new challenge.
It depends on what kind of risk you
feel, but I hope everyone is doing well and everyone is full of happiness.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It depends on the kind of
risk you perceive, but I hope everyone is doing well and filled with happiness.
Especially my pretty teacher, I wish
you all the best :)
>>CORRECT
OR>>Especially to my pretty
teacher, I wish you all the best :)