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What’s the funniest thing that’s ever happened to you while traveling?

임주미/2025-01-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

When I travel in Spain, someone liked me, He is Korean old boy and single and 17 years older than me. his wife passed away 15years ago. He was kind and well-mannered. I don't like him and I refused. I told him " we are just friend" It is the funnist story ,^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ju Mi! This story is very interesting! It's like something from a movie or a drama. ^^ Thank you for sharing it! Have a good day!

~T. Jewel

When I travel in Spain, someone liked me,

>>When I traveled to Spain, someone liked me.

>>When I traveled to Spain, someone showed interest in me.
He is Korean old boy and single and 17 years older than me.

>>He is Korean, single, and 17 years older than me.
his wife passed away 15years ago.

>>His wife passed away 15 years ago.
He was kind and well-mannered.

>>CORRECT
I don't like him and I refused.

>>I don't like him, so I refused.
I told him " we are just friend"

>>I told him, 'We are just friends.'
It is the funnist story ,^^

>>It is the funniest story. ^^