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김순님/2025-01-23

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I think I am suitable a kind of job which I organize someone's schedule like secretary. If I were a high-school student I would have majored in computer. I can manage the time effectively and I am reliable person. But most of all I want to be a travelling guide. Because I like to travel and I am interested in history of world history.
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Good day, Ms. Sunny!
Did you know that some people get jobs based on their personality rather than their major?
I have seen a lot of people working which is different from their major. Do you think you are one of them?
T. Aki~


I think I am suitable a kind of job which I organize someone's schedule like secretary.
>>> I think I am suitable for a kind of job in which I organize someone's schedule like a secretary.

If I were a high-school student I would have majored in computer.
>>>  CORRECT!

I can manage the time effectively and I am reliable person.
>>> I can manage my time effectively and I am a reliable person.

But most of all I want to be a travelling guide.
>>> But most of all I want to be a traveling guide.
>>> But most of all I want to be a tour guide.

Because I like to travel and I am interested in history of world history.
>>> because I like to travel and I am interested in the history of world history.
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