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Yes, I have a diffuser.

유수빈/2025-01-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I have a diffuser. My favorite scent is 'Black Cherry'. It has very sweet scent like strawberry, so sometimes I smell it, I actually want to eat strawberry. Plus, diffuser makes me relax and calm.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara! 

I also have a diffuser but I rarely use it.  haha 
I really like lavender scent but I heard that lavender is not good for dogs. 
I want to try Black cherry too but I have never seen it. 

Andrea

Yes, I have a diffuser.
>> Correct 

My favorite scent is 'Black Cherry'.
>> Correct 

It has very sweet scent like strawberry, so sometimes I smell it, I actually want to eat strawberry.
>> It has a very sweet strawberry smell so when I smell it, I actually want to eat strawberry. 

Plus, diffuser makes me relax and calm.
>> Correct 
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