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김나라/2025-01-17

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: How do you deal with your mistakes? Answer: I think it's important to admit it, so if it's my mistake, I'm going to admit it right away. Because anyone can make mistakes. And I think it's more important than anything else to try not to make the same mistake. I'll have to go through the process of mistakes to grow to the next level.
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Hello, Ms. Nara! That's an insightful perspective. Each mistake can teach us something valuable, helping us develop resilience, adaptability, and a deeper understanding.
-T. Sonny
I think it's important to admit it, so if it's my mistake, I'm going to admit it right away. 
>>Correct!
Because anyone can make mistakes. 
>>It's because anyone can make mistakes.
And I think it's more important than anything else to try not to make the same mistake. 
>>Correct!
I'll have to go through the process of mistakes to grow to the next level.
>>Correct!
OR. It is essential to commit mistakes to learn and grow.
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