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Do you think reading comic strip is good for kids? Why?

차진혁/2025-01-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think the reading comic strips is good for kids is bad because I think comic strip better for studying more story book. But, Iam always reading a comic strips.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good night's sleep! 


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                                             Do you think reading comic strips is good for kids? Why?


I think the reading comic strips is good for kids is bad because I think comic strip better for studying more story book.
>> I think reading comic strips is bad because I believe they should study or read more storybooks or textbooks. 

But, I am always reading a comic strips.
>> But I always read comic strips. 

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