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The homework of 16th Jan.

조윤호/2025-01-16

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Writing task: What are the best ways to make a good first impression? A : In my opinion, a good first impression can be made by smiling always. In the Korean old saying, "You can't spit to the smiling face". This sentence explains what I said.

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Hello, Mr. Eddie! I agree. It’s often the first thing people notice, and it can leave a lasting impression, even if the conversation is brief.

-T. Sonny

In my opinion, a good first impression can be made by smiling always.

>>In my opinion, a good first impression can be made by always smiling.

In the Korean old saying, "You can't spit to the smiling face".

>>There's an old Korean proverb that goes, 'You can't spit in a smiling face.'

This sentence explains what I said.

>>Correct!

OR. This explains my point further.