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What does a holiday mean to you?

유서영/2025-01-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
A holiday means a rest for days that I did my best at studying or working. It is a gift day. On a holiday, I take some rest or hang out with my friend or play the guitar.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Erica! It sounds like you really deserve that rest after all your hard work. Taking time to relax, spend time with friends, or enjoy your guitar is a wonderful way to recharge. Keep up the excellent effort, and keep sharing more of your experiences!
~T. Jenna

A holiday means a rest for days that I did my best at studying or working.
>>A holiday means a break after the days I spent working or studying hard.
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>>A holiday is a chance to unwind after long days of hard work or study.
It is a gift day. 
>> It is like a gift for me.
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>>It feels like a personal reward for my efforts.
On a holiday, I take some rest or hang out with my friend or play the guitar.
>>On a holiday, I take some rest, hang out with my friends, or play the guitar.
OR
>>During a holiday, I indulge in rest, socialize with friends, or engage in playing the guitar.
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