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김순님/2025-01-16

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I totally admit the effect of herbal plants. Their effect shows up late but it\'s effect last for a long time. I saw many customers who were treated their diseases from herbal plants when I worked at the Chinese medical store. A dmirable my teacher Aki~~ K indness,bright and detailed education are her characteristics. I could speak english bravely. Thank you for being my teacher. HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU 🎂 💕
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms Sunny!
I am glad that it's my birthday or I couldn't figure out that you have a "poetic side"
Thank you for this and for diligently writing your homework. Yes, I will enjoy my day. haha
Aki~

I totally admit the effect of herbal plants.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I admit that herbal plants have a great effect.

Their effect shows up late but it\'s effect last for a long time.
>>> Their effectivity might be late but it lasts for a long time.

I saw many customers who were treated their diseases from herbal plants when I worked at the Chinese medical store.
>>> I saw many customers who got treated for their diseases from herbal plants when I worked at the Chinese medical store.

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