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How do you perceive failure?

박혜진/2025-01-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Actually It's not easy to perceive failure, but I try to see it as a natural part of my growth. I believe I can learn more about life through failure and gain better insight. Failure makes me a better person.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Jinny~
Someone told me that failure is not because you did not succeed, but because you are going through progress that aids your personal growth ^^.
Chammy
Actually It's not easy to perceive failure, but I try to see it as a natural part of my growth. I believe I can learn more about life through failure and gain better insight. Failure makes me a better person.
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>> Accepting failure can be challenging, but I try to view it as an essential part of my personal development. I believe that failure provides valuable perspective, teaches important life lessons, and helps me grow into a better individual.
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