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I don't want to be a firefighter.

유수빈/2025-01-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

No, I don’t want to be a firefighter. I respect this job, but I scared fire. And when I imagine that I’m faced emergency situations, I feel very nervous and embarrassed. So, I'll do not anything in situations that need my help as a firefighter.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kara,

I think being a firefighter is really hard.

You need to be brave and strong mentally and physically.

I am watching a series called 9-1-1.

All characters are amazing.

Andrea

No, I don’t want to be a firefighter.

>> Correct

I respect this job, but I scared fire.

>> I respect this job but I am scared of fire.

And when I imagine that I’m faced emergency situations, I feel very nervous and embarrassed.

>> And when I imagine that I’m face in an emergency situation, I feel very nervous and embarrassed.

So, I'll do not anything in situations that need my help as a firefighter.

>> So, I'll do anything in situations that would need my help as a firefighter.