I have both agreeing and disagreeing points that smartphone affects on social interaction negatively. Agreeing poin is face-to-face meeting has decreased beacause of smartphones. However, disagreeing point is online interaction and conversation have increased.
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I have both agreeing and disagreeing points that smartphone affects on social interaction negatively.
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OR>>>I have both agreeing and disagreeing points regarding the negative impact of smartphones on social interaction.
Agreeing poin is face-to-face meeting has decreased beacause of smartphones.
>>>One agreeing point is that face-to-face meetings have decreased due to smartphones.
However, disagreeing point is online interaction and conversation have increased.
>>>However, a disagreeing point is that online interactions and conversations have actually increased.