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Activities in Bohol

양기연/2025-01-15

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I want to go to Chocolate Hills and Bali casa Island. I heard that the two places were designated as World Natural Heritage sites because of unique natural scenery and biodiversity. I am looking forward to seeing beautiful sunset in Chocolate Hills. Of course, I want to enjoy under water activities like snorkeling. I'm looking forward to seeing the beautiful sea but I am worried about my poor swimming skills.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I really hope you can visit soon. I hope Bohol meets your expectations, if not exceeds them.

- T. Caitlyn

I want to go to Chocolate Hills and Bali casa Island.

>> I want to go to Chocolate Hills and Balicasag Island.

I heard that the two places were designated as World Natural Heritage sites because of unique natural scenery and biodiversity.

>> CORRECT

I am looking forward to seeing beautiful sunset in Chocolate Hills.

>> CORRECT

Of course, I want to enjoy underwater activities like snorkeling.

>> CORRECT

I'm looking forward to seeing the beautiful sea but I am worried about my poor swimming skills.

>> CORRECT